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Sunset

Postby Onyx on Tue May 17, 2005 4:51 pm

Bracketted the shot heavily, this was the one I chose as the most 'ideal' exposure IMO. Your thoughts?!

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Re: Sunset

Postby SoCal Steve on Tue May 17, 2005 4:55 pm

Onyx wrote:I took the time out of photographing to write THIS post?


I'm glad you find time to do BOTH, Onyx. Nice shot.
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue May 17, 2005 4:57 pm

Chi - this is exactly how I remember HK - therefore I would say a great shot :D
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Postby Glen on Tue May 17, 2005 5:00 pm

It is how I remember it too. Great
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Postby Onyx on Tue May 17, 2005 5:19 pm

Thanks, you guys must have faulty memories cos HK is hardly ever like that - smog/haze free days are rare. ;)

Here's another image, this one taken in Macau. I just walked out of 'Museu de Macau' and spotted this young lady sitting by the edge of the courtyard, overlooking the city skyline. I think I still had the 50 f/1.4 low light lens on... it was a "decisive moment" so I took the shot. Landscapes of the city buildings by themselves were very bland, but I think adding a human element makes a difference:
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Cropped to maximise impact, the original was far more ordinary...
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Postby Glen on Tue May 17, 2005 5:28 pm

Chi, you need to get back to the clear skies of aus. I thought the first shot looked hazy :wink:



ps Like the cropped shot
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Postby dooda on Tue May 17, 2005 5:33 pm

Yeh Glen, can't really tell if it's sunny or cloudy or what, sort of in between. That would be Vancouver if it didn't rain here atleast once a week.

I love the crop Onyx, and man that lens makes a difference as you've gotten a great image out of a pretty heavy crop. It seems like the Kit lens doesn't quite lend itself to cropping that heavily. Look at all the AC units. Don't have to worry about that here in Hongcouver.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue May 17, 2005 8:13 pm

Chi

The cropped shot of the skyline is excellent and a fantasic demo of how an "ordinary" shot can yield a great one with judicious cropping.
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Postby Onyx on Wed May 18, 2005 2:35 am

Thanks guys. That sunset was relatively haze-free by HK standards. ;) I guess I'm missing Sydney too much!

Yeah, that 50 prime is a very nice lens that resolves well... (that was a f/5.6 shot) however for my intended use of low light/indoors, I find it a little too long on the D70 (sometimes I can't take another step back!)

Continuing on the cropped theme (I never was much of a a cropper before), my new avatar was the inadvertant reflection of a fat man caught taking this pic:
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