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Postby JordanP on Wed May 18, 2005 9:39 pm

This is an image from a recent wedding I shot with Geoff. Just thought I would give it a little old world feel with some grain (I think we call it noise now-a-day)

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Anyway in a world of massive megapixels and clean noisless images I thought I would throw this one in for comments and suggestions.

What do you think, is there still room for images like this one?
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Postby bago100 on Wed May 18, 2005 9:43 pm

Hi Jordanp

I think there is plenty of room for photos such as this.

I like the grainy black and white look - gives it a timeless quality in my opinion.

I don' think the grainy black and white look would work with all types of photos in my opinion but it certainly does with portraits.

Well done!

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Postby PiroStitch on Wed May 18, 2005 9:49 pm

It's a good effect, but I think you overdid the amount of grains in the image. For me, it's bordering on too much and distracts the viewer from the actual photo itself.
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Postby Glen on Wed May 18, 2005 9:57 pm

Craig, like it a lot :wink:
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Postby johndec on Wed May 18, 2005 10:07 pm

Craig, love it but I would like to see a comparison with say 1/2 the grain.
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Postby darb on Wed May 18, 2005 10:17 pm

cant say it does much for me at all :( ... maybe bout 1/4 the grain?
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Postby Onyx on Wed May 18, 2005 10:30 pm

I love it, but the grain is too uniform... should be more blocky and random.
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Postby JordanP on Wed May 18, 2005 10:32 pm

here it is with about half the grain - for those that wanted less

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Thanks for the feed back so far. The use of grain can get quite arty so it is generaly something you like or not.

Keep the thoughts coming :)
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Postby JordanP on Wed May 18, 2005 10:35 pm

Onyx wrote:I love it, but the grain is too uniform... should be more blocky and random.


Cheers. I used Gaussian distribution of noise to try and avoid that but I see what you mean. Any idea on how to achieve a more random effect?
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed May 18, 2005 11:11 pm

I like the original a lot. :)
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Postby johndec on Wed May 18, 2005 11:50 pm

Thanks Craig. I prefer No 2. Of course what is important is which one the subject/customer prefers... :lol:
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Postby Killakoala on Wed May 18, 2005 11:52 pm

I like both of them. I like to add a bit of noise to all my B&W images as it adds character.

I reckon both pics would look sensational printed and framed.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu May 19, 2005 1:01 am

I like the grain and the sepia...but this image breaks one of the cardinal laws of composition. It has 3 dark corners and one white corner...the roses. The energy of the composition leaks out of that white corner.

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Postby sirhc55 on Thu May 19, 2005 2:21 am

Rules were made to be broken - I like both and prefer #1 :D
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Postby dooda on Thu May 19, 2005 4:24 am

Great shot, and is framed really well imo.

The first one looks like Sandpaper. The second one sort of does too, but I guess that's what graininess does. I like grain but not sure how much I like it on this pic. Sort of gimmicky I guess.
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Postby SoCal Steve on Thu May 19, 2005 6:32 am

Personally, I like the first one. Women, most specifically the subjects, in the pictures generally don't like anything that doesn't show their complexions creamy smooth. So the bride might be less enthused with this result than we are. :wink:
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Postby gstark on Thu May 19, 2005 8:03 am

I prefer #2 ...

but I'm wondering how it might look with a bit of optical flare as well, perhaps around the bouquet and where the face meets it.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu May 19, 2005 12:27 pm

Matt. K wrote:I like the grain and the sepia...but this image breaks one of the cardinal laws of composition. It has 3 dark corners and one white corner...the roses. The energy of the composition leaks out of that white corner.

I'm ready for the flak.

And it's not "neat and in the middle" Matt :wink:
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Postby MHD on Thu May 19, 2005 12:33 pm

Maybe it is my youth speaking but I dont think I like the noise at all..
I would like to see the original, and then maybe some glowing skin effect put on to it (layer which is blurred added)
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Postby darb on Thu May 19, 2005 12:48 pm

SoCal Steve wrote:Personally, I like the first one. Women, most specifically the subjects, in the pictures generally don't like anything that doesn't show their complexions creamy smooth. So the bride might be less enthused with this result than we are. :wink:


thats why if im taking a photo of girls who may be a bit concious of a blemish or something, i may clone it out ... if you make them look great (read : fake i suppose) then they love it, and dont mind being photographed as they know I'll do a good job ... I also rarely keep a photo of someone if its not a flattering photo. (even the wrong white balance can make someone look sick or pale or wahtever.)
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Postby MHD on Thu May 19, 2005 12:55 pm

I agree entirely Darb...
Some times I look at a photo and just go erk!

some times a camera can be VERY unflattering and I only show people I know the best (and occasionaly PPed ;) ) shots

otherwise taking photos becomes taboo
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Postby darb on Thu May 19, 2005 1:00 pm

most girls in my social circles pretty much do as i say now when the camera gets pulled out ... pose a little, smile, turn into light ... whatever. Of course i give them the "thats it baby, cool as ice, bit more smile, bit more skirt, thats it baby" hahaha.

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Postby shakey on Fri May 20, 2005 8:48 pm

JordanP wrote:here it is with about half the grain - for those that wanted less


Thanks for the feed back so far. The use of grain can get quite arty so it is generaly something you like or not.

Keep the thoughts coming :)


How about the bouquet with no grain using an adjustment layer, but the rest of the shot with the half grain?

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Postby Geoff on Fri May 20, 2005 9:14 pm

JordanP wrote:here it is with about half the grain - for those that wanted less

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Thanks for the feed back so far. The use of grain can get quite arty so it is generaly something you like or not.

Keep the thoughts coming :)


Hi Craig/partner :)
I like the 2nd one with half the amount of grain more than the first one :). Now...who took it? The maestro or the learner? :)
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Postby JordanP on Sun May 22, 2005 3:24 pm

A shot from yourself I believe young Geoff. (heavily cropped)
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Postby leigh999 on Sun May 22, 2005 6:11 pm

I like giving the grainy treatment to all sorts of images -B&W and colour.

I agree with Onyx that in this case it is a bit too uniform for my taste. I tend to visualise grain with high contrast images. Below is an example.

I create a duplicate layer and use Filter>Texture>Grain (has options for intensity, contrast and type) and then can adjust opacity and blend of 'grain layer' to suit taste.

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