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Postby flipfrog on Wed May 18, 2005 5:10 pm

...lab

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tricked!!!!

Postby redline on Wed May 18, 2005 5:22 pm

oh well i was expecting some cool looking food product shot :(
nice colored dog and bg, but i think the white really draws attendtion away from the dog
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Postby SoCal Steve on Wed May 18, 2005 6:14 pm

Beautiful tonal range.
Up to your usual high standards. Now that you're shooting Raw, the fur's really gonna fly.
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Postby mic on Wed May 18, 2005 6:16 pm

Womans best friend : Chocolate :D

What a proud looking old fella, very nice Dee.

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Postby mudder on Wed May 18, 2005 7:50 pm

He(?) looks very ummm.... Contemplative? Almost as though he's thinking of something deep... Love dogs... Agree with Redline about the background, but nice exposure...
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Postby SteveGriffin on Wed May 18, 2005 9:54 pm

Nice shot but I have to admit that I am feeling a bit robbed at the moment. The last shot that I lookded at contained syrup filled chocolate frogs and the one is a chocolate dog.

Bring on the 100% real stuff someone please - life is too short :P
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Postby flipfrog on Thu May 19, 2005 3:57 am

ok ok...happy now? :roll:

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fresh outta the oven chocolate cheescake cupcakes.... :wink:
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Postby dooda on Thu May 19, 2005 4:44 am

Dee, really good shots. Nice BW work on the dog, and the cupcakes shot is about perfect.

On the dog I think that maybe he's a little bit too far on the right, eyes could be positioned more to the left of the frame, as the right edge is crowding him a tad? Is this being too picky? It might be but your shots are so refined as it is I've got to try and say something right?
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Postby flipfrog on Thu May 19, 2005 5:02 am

nope i totally agree...

there is not room for her to look into on the right...which you need in any kind of portrait...
Tika (my parents dog) was not cooperating....i actually had her positioned exactly how i wanted her, except the background was not what i wanted....

its not easy to get her to move and repose :(
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Postby mic on Thu May 19, 2005 11:10 am

Dee,

Those CupCakes are making me hungry, I could eat 5 of them now for morning tea. Yum. :roll:

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Postby SteveGriffin on Thu May 19, 2005 7:25 pm

Much better - the topic is much more balanced now.

Great lab shot and very yummy cup cakes. Thanks for indulging the sillyness. :twisted:
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Postby ozimax on Thu May 19, 2005 8:04 pm

Dog is great Flip (I don't like the black frame tho'), chocolate cakes are great too.

My wife cooks the world's best scones but has no idea when it comes to cupcakes - they come out of the oven stale! (Don't worry, she admits to it - she won't bash me if she finds out this thread, at least not much!)

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