My very first black and white.

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My very first black and white.

Postby whiz on Fri May 27, 2005 11:35 pm

This is the first time I've decreased the colour depth to a black and white. This is a friend of mine who loves getting her picture taken. Particular things I was looking to get this time was the contours of her back. I only had natural lighting coming in from the side. I'm pretty happy with this shot and it printed just fine even having been cropped about 20 percent.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sat May 28, 2005 12:09 am

:shock: at the subject, don't think I'd like to see her bad side in a dark alley.

Very artistic photo though, the shadows are a bit too dark but I guess it depends on the outcome you're after.
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Postby leek on Sat May 28, 2005 2:05 am

That's a great pic Whiz... Nice definition...
I wish I could get models like that...
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Postby dooda on Sat May 28, 2005 5:37 am

A tad too much contrast I think, but very close to bang on in my opinion.
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Postby gstark on Sat May 28, 2005 7:58 am

Whiz,

Very good, but not quite enough shadow detail IMHO.

If you shot this in raw, have a bit of a play with the NEF file and try using a different (slightly softer contrast setting) to bring these out a little more.

I suspect that the use of a reflector would have been very nice at the time of making the exposure; it could have helped add some extra light to the face, which is where I feel this is lacking at the moment. It doesn't need much, mind you, but I think it does need a little more.
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Postby Greg B on Sat May 28, 2005 11:10 am

Good shot whiz, and great to have an interesting and willing subject.

You may like to try using the channels to get your BW conversion - I reckon the green channel would be good for this kind of shot.

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Postby Raydar on Sat May 28, 2005 12:00 pm

Great work, I like!!!!!

As Greg has said, try playing around with the green channel to see what you can come up with.

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Postby KerryPierce on Sat May 28, 2005 2:00 pm

Interesting shot, Whiz. I like the high contrast and the composition. I do agree with the notion that the shadows are a little too dark. :)
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Postby mudder on Sat May 28, 2005 6:34 pm

I like this, it's something different, good composition. As a few have mentioned, I'd try to get a bit more detail of the muscle definition in her back... Wouldn't give her any lip at the pub either :shock:
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Postby whiz on Sun May 29, 2005 10:53 am

Thanks guys. Noted. She's keen to do some more so now that I've got a bit more lens selection I should be able to try some more stuff...
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