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I love this dog

Postby dooda on Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:00 pm

I love taking photos of my dog, and he seems to like it...or atleast find it interesting. I tinkered with it in PS 7 until I couldn't stand the tediousness of it. What do you think? The next one is a photo of the water competition. It was all I could find at the last minute, but I thought it sort of works.

file://localhost/Users/mattelton/Pictur ... ourRev.jpg

Again, I don't know why it wants to come out so huge when I stick it here. Here is my water photo. Looking at it so huge makes me think that my depth of field wasn't quite there. I love the silvery color of the reflection, it gives the water spirit, which was my goal.

file://localhost/Users/mattelton/Pictur ... C_0088.JPG

Let me know if you can even see these photos. I don't really know what i'm doing and am guessing. Any suggestions are welcome
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Postby bago100 on Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:05 pm

Hi Dooda

Love to see pics of your dog but your links don't work

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Postby Tony on Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:10 pm

just letting you know that I can't see your photos. I'm not real sure, but all I did was click on the Img button, pasted the URL you can find when you right click on the image and look at the properties, then clicked on the Img button again
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Postby gstark on Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:33 pm

Dooda,

Your links, as posted, won't work, because they're referencing your internal server. That's the bit where it says "localhost", and it basically - and literally - translates to "the machine I'm on right now".

For you, that's fine, because that's where the files actually are, but for the rest of us ... well ... my computer is also looking, not on your system, but on "the computer I'm on, right now:. That is, my computer.

And for Tony, it's looking on Tony's computer, and so on. :)

There are a couple of steps you need to go through in order to post your images.


Step one is to find a public hosting facility; pBase, Smugmug, etc.

Once you're set up there, you can upload the images there for display, and then in here you just post a reference to the actual image file as it's displayed.

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I think I found something

Postby dooda on Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:49 pm

It is insanely late (early in the Morning) here but I decided I was going to stick to this until I got it right, I'm tired of taking photos and not showing anyone.

A couple of my dog and a couple of the area. Garibaldi Peak is in Squamish where I work. Please give me your most ruthless critiques as it is the only way I know that I can improve (most people say "nice photos").

http://www.flickr.com/photos/87899971@N00/?saved=1

I hope this works
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:13 pm

Dooda
I love your pics! The mountain is beautiful.
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Re: I think I found something

Postby Greg B on Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:27 pm

dooda wrote:It is insanely late (early in the Morning) here but I decided I was going to stick to this until I got it right, I'm tired of taking photos and not showing anyone.

A couple of my dog and a couple of the area. Garibaldi Peak is in Squamish where I work. Please give me your most ruthless critiques as it is the only way I know that I can improve (most people say "nice photos").

http://www.flickr.com/photos/87899971@N00/?saved=1

I hope this works


OK dooda, you want honest critiques, you shall have them.....

216

Very good example of this kind of thing. I like it a lot.

191

Boring, and very flat

245

This is a beautiful photograph, the light is excellent, the serenity is memorable, congratulations

336

Not bad but not great, probably more fun for you than a viewer

299

Good, I like the tiny bit of red on the person on the bridge, I possibly would have suggested including a little bit more sky (which looks as though it is fairly dramatic).

25

Great shot of Max - there is no substitute for getting down to their level. Nice warm colouring too.

108

Fantastic shot of Garibaldi, grey and dramatic, nicely composed, first rate.



Glad you got your links sorted out dooda, your pictures are good.

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thanks

Postby dooda on Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:39 pm

You can't know how exciting it is for me to post photos and get good critique, I've been waiting to do this for some time. Funny how they don't mean as much when they aren't out there being seen. I was especially interested to hear Matt's reaction to 336. I quite like this with the profile, but perhaps my relationship with the dog enhances my experience with the photo.

Again thankyou, and please more!!!!
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Postby Onyx on Sun Nov 07, 2004 10:02 pm

Dooda, I'm not too keen on your doggie stuff (just a personal thing - not a dog person), but your nature work is stunning!
245 - NorthEast Vancouver Island, that takes my breath away.

25 - did you deliberately vignette this shot? I don't quite like the half way but not completely sepia tone, but that's also a personal preference thing...
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Re: thanks

Postby Greg B on Mon Nov 08, 2004 8:30 am

dooda wrote: I was especially interested to hear Matt's reaction to 336. I quite like this with the profile, but perhaps my relationship with the dog enhances my experience with the photo.



I can't let Matt take the blame for my thoughts dooda, it was me :)

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Postby dooda on Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:19 am

Oops, sorry about that Greg. You know, at 3 in the morning the mind doesn't operate quite as well. :oops:


Onyx,
I wasn't trying to make 25 sepia, I was just trying to warm up the colors, the original was a little cold. Though halfway Sepia is what it looks like, I think that the original colors (orange brown and beige) helps that look along. It isn't deliberatly vignetted, but I enjoyed the effect as I played with photoshop and so I went with it as it It emphasizes the dog's glow. I think the original is slightly vignetted.. This was one of my first D70 photos (and definitly the first that I post processed). I find what makes the shot work for me is the lines on the bottom.

Shot 245 is perhaps one of my favorites. I have some others from this trip that I'll post here as well.
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