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Is this going to hurt???

Postby cc@t on Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:41 am

My first post - hopefully this comes ok.....

My sons first soccer experience!!!!
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:52 am

Heh that's pretty cute. I'd crop the coach's hands out though from the RHS.
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Postby thaddeus on Wed Jun 01, 2005 7:58 am

to me the hands add a lot - they show there is someone there helping and supporting the kids. without them i would infer that there's some kind of opposition just out of shot. instead, it's the exact opposite!
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Postby Oneputt on Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:30 am

Nice sharp pic. As the image loaded I thought that the next kid in line was giving someone the bird :lol:
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:31 am

I love the index finger from the kid, was he point that to the coach :lol:
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Postby BBJ on Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:48 am

Great shot, expression on his face says it all.
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jun 01, 2005 9:56 am

”Is this going to hurt?” - the expression says it all plus the hands, IMO, are important.

Great first post :D
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Postby robboh on Wed Jun 01, 2005 10:21 am

Love it. The light is nice, good skin tones and the colours just pop.
Plus of course the facial expression and also that the kid looks like he is birding the coach.
One to be proud of IMHO.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Jun 01, 2005 10:47 am

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This is a great first post. The colours are good and the composition works exceptionally well at telling the story. It definitely needs the coaches hands. Having all the kids in focus enhances the shot too since the look on all their faces tells different but interesting stories - adding extra depth to the image on subseuqent viewings. Well done.
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Postby Glen on Wed Jun 01, 2005 11:17 am

Great capture, nice composition with the hands and great DOF to highlight the players
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Postby cc@t on Wed Jun 01, 2005 11:31 am

Thanks for all the positive feedback - had quite a few laughs that day at the kids expense!!! I have to admit that when I first saw the pic I thought the kid in the background was giving someone the finger!!
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Postby mudder on Wed Jun 01, 2005 7:58 pm

That's a great image, keep that one for the memories to recount later... Great first post!
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