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Postby tcsphoto on Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:19 am

One of the shots I took at the American LeMans last month. Any comments welcome.

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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:22 am

Nice close shot tcs - my only suggestion would be to give the wheels a little motion blur in PS :D

Sorry Tom - forgot to say welcome to the other side (of the world I mean) - hope to see lots of photos posted, especially of where you are from.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:30 am

Welcome. :)

I'm going to say that it's a tad dark, but that just might be my monitor.

Nice shot, however. :)
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Postby tcsphoto on Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:41 am

Heres a brighter and faster one.

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Hi

Postby yeocsa on Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:19 pm

Hi

2nd one is alot better. I would prefer to see the whole car if possible. Are you using a prime?

regards,

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Postby cc@t on Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:34 pm

Hi tcsphoto
I cant offer any critique as I'm only new here myself, but they look great to me - have to admit I would've liked to have seen the whole of the cars tho....
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Postby mudder on Thu Jun 02, 2005 9:42 pm

G'day Tom,

Woah, these are really sharp, seems like you've done the panning well, I'd echo getting the extremities of the car in but I like 'em :) Maybe BBJ can chirp in with some tips... Coooeeeeee...

Welcome to the forum mate :)

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Re: Hi

Postby ozimax on Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:46 pm

yeocsa wrote:Hi

2nd one is alot better. I would prefer to see the whole car if possible. Are you using a prime?

regards,

Arthur


G'day Tom, like both shots but echo Arthur's comments, would like to see whole car, good shots and well done, Max
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Postby ozimax on Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:48 pm

Are there any D70 nuts going to China for V8 supercars? Anyone have a spare return ticket to Shanghai? Will trade for an old Voightlander 1958 model? Or my box brownie?

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Postby gstark on Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:58 am

ozimax wrote:Are there any D70 nuts going to China for V8 supercars? Anyone have a spare return ticket to Shanghai? Will trade for an old Voightlander 1958 model? Or my box brownie?

Max :D


Max,

I saw some sub Au$400 fares to HK just a week or two back. Check with VA and see if the deal is still on and relevant for the period in question.
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