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Another shot from the Newb...

Postby MagicNikon on Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:41 pm

This was shot at Myrtle Beach, SC on New Year's weekend '05. Me and the bird were the only ones up this early :D

Not from my Nikon...I had my trusty Oly E-10 with me (the Nikon was still on my wish list).

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Postby Killakoala on Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:56 pm

Nice image, but with a bit more saturation, would look amazing.

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Postby MagicNikon on Sat Jun 04, 2005 2:12 pm

Thank you, Steve, for the suggestion. Perhaps this is closer to "a bit more saturation".

Also, I enjoyed your explanantion of Crop Factor in your tutorial. I was having a hard time figuring out what the sales people were talking about. I asked them point blank, "If this is a true TTL camera, how can a 200mm focal length "magically" become 300mm?"

They'd look blankly and stare and repeat "You see, this has a 1.5x focal multiplier..." blah blah....

Sales Training! Anyway, heres the updated pic...

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Postby stormygirl on Sat Jun 04, 2005 3:10 pm

The added saturation looks fantastic! A very nice image. Welcome to the forum, by the way! Looking forward to more pics in the future!
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jun 04, 2005 4:09 pm

Added saturation has lifted the pic tremendously
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Postby Alex on Sat Jun 04, 2005 4:28 pm

I agree. Looks very beautiful when colours are saturated.

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Postby dhess on Sat Jun 04, 2005 6:06 pm

Nice pic MN.

What kind of bird is that? Is it an oyster catcher?
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Postby stephen on Sat Jun 04, 2005 6:23 pm

pic number two defineatly looks a lot better .Well done magicnikon
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Postby MagicNikon on Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:27 am

If by Oyster catcher, you mean Rat with Wings, then yes, it is a seagull. :)

I have lived in North Carolina for 10 years and this January was the first time I had been to the beach. I like it best when there are no crowds.
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