Reflections in monochrome

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Reflections in monochrome

Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:42 am

Haven't taken any pics for a while so the visit to casa birddog at Boat Harbour was fun despite the lousy weather. Here's a picture I loved, but took a while to get a treatment I liked. Click the image for a larger version.

My other shots from this outing can be found here and here


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Postby flipfrog on Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:52 am

very interesting unconventional portrait....

like it
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Postby leek on Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:56 am

Nice shot Peter... D70users walk on water! :lol:
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:40 am

I like this one Peter. Very intersrting subject matter and a nice backdrop and foreground type of thing. :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jun 12, 2005 11:36 am

Nicely done Peter, with a few well known personalities to boot 8)
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Postby zeb00 on Sun Jun 12, 2005 12:36 pm

Very nice photo. what does it look like with the group of three croped off the right as they are kind of bunched and take away from the rest of the photo. BTW watch out for choppers. i think that is the only heli pad to never have a chopper land on it.
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Postby pippin88 on Sun Jun 12, 2005 12:52 pm

Is that what it is? We were trying to work out the function of a giant concrete pad.

IMO the bunched people on the right sort of lead into the more spaced out people on the left - a curve or a spiral. It would work better if there was a little less bunching, and perhaps a little more spacing between those on the right most.
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Postby Catcha on Sun Jun 12, 2005 12:54 pm

Great shot, keeps me wondering whether the ground is really slippery or not...good effects
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:45 pm

Thanks guys for the comments.

pippin88 wrote:IMO the bunched people on the right sort of lead into the more spaced out people on the left - a curve or a spiral. It would work better if there was a little less bunching, and perhaps a little more spacing between those on the right most.

That's the problem I had with the shot. I like the masts that line up behind The people three people in the centre and tried cropping out the group on the right, but kept coming back to the way I posted above because of the lead in effect from the right.

FWIW below is the crop I did with the right bunch removed:

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Postby Manta on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:54 pm

Both great Peter but I like the cropped version better.
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Postby zeb00 on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:59 pm

pippin88 wrote:Is that what it is? We were trying to work out the function of a giant concrete pad.

IMO the bunched people on the right sort of lead into the more spaced out people on the left - a curve or a spiral. It would work better if there was a little less bunching, and perhaps a little more spacing between those on the right most.


yeah i think they have been banned from using it thats why they have removed the big (H) and put up flag poles around it.

i see what you mean about the crop its a hard one
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Postby BBJ on Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:22 pm

I like this pic peter, it's good to see womeone in the midle there wearing my usual atire, the shorts.LOL Actually i have jeans ontoday been out on my BMW riding so yeh i think overall this is a nice pic and well done and if only you could have got boats on the same level they could have been waling on water.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:56 pm

BBJ wrote:I like this pic peter, it's good to see womeone in the midle there wearing my usual atire, the shorts.LOL Actually i have jeans ontoday been out on my BMW riding so yeh i think overall this is a nice pic and well done and if only you could have got boats on the same level they could have been waling on water.

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Postby Matt. K on Sun Jun 12, 2005 8:29 pm

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A surreal image...in fact, rather bizaar. They are the ones I like the best because they are so damned hard to get. You got the eye!
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:02 pm

Matt. K wrote:Peter
A surreal image...in fact, rather bizaar. They are the ones I like the best because they are so damned hard to get. You got the eye!

Ahh but I feel a bit guilty about this since I know you also have one similar and I was able to get mine up first because you were still at birddogs :oops:

This was the first one I PP'd since it just screamed out at me when I saw it. Took about an hour to settle on a treatement I liked though. Got to bed at 3 am
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Postby BBJ on Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:06 pm

Thanks Peter, i maybe figured that but wasn't sure as face is a bit dark but yeh i live in shorts drives everyone mad asking am i cold, i gues i am used to it.
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Postby Geoff on Sun Jun 12, 2005 11:33 pm

Pete I really like this shot, it is so different and unique...well done!
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Postby mic on Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:27 am

Yep, unique like you Stubbsy :wink:

Great shot, I like the crop one better.

You could have named it ( Cool Feet :lol: )

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Postby Neeper on Mon Jun 13, 2005 4:55 am

Very interesting shot indeed.
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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Jun 13, 2005 5:09 am

Very cool shot, Peter. :D I assume, since you said it took an hour to process, that there was no water on the pad. If so, what technique did you use to get the effect?
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:42 am

KerryPierce wrote:Very cool shot, Peter. :D I assume, since you said it took an hour to process, that there was no water on the pad. If so, what technique did you use to get the effect?

The pad was covered with water and the reflections were in the shot - I'm not THAT clever :D.

It was a very overcast day and originally I was trying to give it punch as a colour shot and wasted probably 30 minutes or so. Then I decided to do monochrome which was in the right direction, so I experimented with different crops - the image is taller than either of these crops and has more detail on the left and right - once I had the crop right I then fiddled with sepia and B & W and decided B & W was the go. I played with curves to get the people and the shadows right (I didn't want the detail of the people to be too dominant) since the feature was the shadows. Finally I hit the right B & W conversion. I used Nik Color Efex Graduated ND filter to darken the top and lose some detail in the people, then used Nik Color Efex Paper Toner filter to convert to monochrome.

And all this was done in NC, although I used PS CS2 to add the border around the posted image.
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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Jun 13, 2005 11:38 am

stubbsy wrote:
KerryPierce wrote:Very cool shot, Peter. :D I assume, since you said it took an hour to process, that there was no water on the pad. If so, what technique did you use to get the effect?

The pad was covered with water and the reflections were in the shot - I'm not THAT clever :D.



ahh, okay, now I understand why it took so long to process. :D I know of a couple of techniques or tools, like Flaming Pear's Flood filter, that you could do that with, but it would be a real bear to do it with the type of image you have. :)
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:32 pm

Peter

there is alot of storytelling going on in the image so conceptually it is
engaging, the reflections show a duality of the subject and their abstracted reflected personas

leep it up

were these taken this saturday long weekend or some time back?
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jun 14, 2005 11:28 am

Thank you all for your comments. I really like this shot and am still working on getting the cropping right. My latest iteration is slightly wider to add a bit of space to the right and some more of the top. I think I've stopped fiddling :?
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