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Postby Neeper on Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:40 pm

Just a few more I finished from my trip.

Here's the link to view all of them:

http://www.opendirviewer.nl/?url=http%3 ... ecount=500

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Postby MHD on Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:52 pm

oooohhh... hard to pick between neice and monaco!
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Postby gstark on Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:28 pm

MHD wrote:oooohhh... hard to pick between neice and monaco!


Nah .... not at all.

Venice wins, every time. :)
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:28 pm

Johnny. More excellent pics from your European sojourn. For the I really like the St Gour one above and the one of St Peter's Basilica on the web link.

The only one that I think is a little lacking is The Thinker - the statue is too dark against the bright sky & lot's of detail is missing because of that
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:40 pm

Yes, Johnny - a real photographer's eye and excellent presentation of your work. These are seriously good images. BTW, I hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but your pic of Rodin's "The Thinker (Le Penseur)" was, I'm fairly sure, taken in the Musee Rodin in Paris rather than in Rome. I have a picture taken from the same spot in 2003, and the surrounds are identical.

Stubbsy, it is very hard to capture the "blackness" of these statues. Whatever medium was used is really deep, deep black and balancing the contrast becomes problematic. If you lighten the black to get detail, you wash out everything else.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:52 pm

cricketfan wrote:Stubbsy, it is very hard to capture the "blackness" of these statues. Whatever medium was used is really deep, deep black and balancing the contrast becomes problematic. If you lighten the black to get detail, you wash out everything else.

Yep I'm just being extra picky cos these are all so god damn good. Still think the exposure could be brought up a touch by extra work in PS with layering though
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Jun 09, 2005 6:00 pm

stubbsy wrote: Still think the exposure could be brought up a touch by extra work in PS with layering though


Yes, a bit of selection & layering could do it.
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Postby leek on Thu Jun 09, 2005 7:51 pm

Really nice pics Johnny... You have made me feel quite homesick for the historical sites of Europe...

Was that your accommodation in Amsterdam??? It looks like a very dodgy backpackers hostel... Or a very cheap brothel? :lol:
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Postby Frankenstein on Thu Jun 09, 2005 8:29 pm

Fabulous shots, just fabulous

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Postby ozimax on Thu Jun 09, 2005 10:41 pm

Wonderful, wonderful, esp the Amsterdam one, Max
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Postby huynhie on Thu Jun 09, 2005 10:47 pm

Looks good Neeper.

I cant wait until my trip over there next month :D :D :D :D
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jun 09, 2005 11:23 pm

Neeper - even if Gary and I disagree about certain matters I totally agree with him on Venice - a city that can be photographed a million times and each pic would be different - love your shots :D
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Postby Neeper on Fri Jun 10, 2005 1:54 am

cricketfan wrote:Yes, Johnny - a real photographer's eye and excellent presentation of your work. These are seriously good images. BTW, I hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but your pic of Rodin's "The Thinker (Le Penseur)" was, I'm fairly sure, taken in the Musee Rodin in Paris rather than in Rome. I have a picture taken from the same spot in 2003, and the surrounds are identical.

Stubbsy, it is very hard to capture the "blackness" of these statues. Whatever medium was used is really deep, deep black and balancing the contrast becomes problematic. If you lighten the black to get detail, you wash out everything else.


Damn it you're right, it was in Paris. I got mixed up!! I'll have to change it. Thanks for pointing it out.

I figured I should have processed the thinker a little more. I was POURING rain when I was trying to take the picture, and I had to move on to Napolean's tomb. I only took one shot of the thinker, and left. Not much time was put into taking that photograph, and it shows!!

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Postby Onyx on Fri Jun 10, 2005 2:13 am

JT, I love the pics. Very well done - you're realising the fruits of your labour. PP'ing so many pics can't be fun, but the results are amazing. You've sold me on Europe. 5 Euro refreshments aside, it's a must do in this lifetime.
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Postby Hutchy on Fri Jun 10, 2005 2:52 am

Great shots Neeper - You have a definate eye for detail. The colours and scenery sooooo make me want to pack my bags and go backpacking again. :D

So, presuming I'm right about how you did these:

I am curious about your panorama (Nice, France) and why you chose to shoot it with a wide angle lens and then stitch only three shots? For me, the horizon is uncomfortable on the eye (especially as a water line does not curve).

I'm also wondering if you stitched together the Monte Carlo, Monaco pano as there seems to be a stitch line resembling a \ on the left of the M.

Other than those two (as I'm a pedantic bastard), I love the shots and hope you sell a bunch. :D
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Postby dooda on Fri Jun 10, 2005 2:53 am

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Postby Neeper on Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:42 am

Hutchy wrote:Great shots Neeper - You have a definate eye for detail. The colours and scenery sooooo make me want to pack my bags and go backpacking again. :D

So, presuming I'm right about how you did these:

I am curious about your panorama (Nice, France) and why you chose to shoot it with a wide angle lens and then stitch only three shots? For me, the horizon is uncomfortable on the eye (especially as a water line does not curve).

I'm also wondering if you stitched together the Monte Carlo, Monaco pano as there seems to be a stitch line resembling a \ on the left of the M.

Other than those two (as I'm a pedantic bastard), I love the shots and hope you sell a bunch. :D


I honestly know little or next to nothing about panoramas. If you have tips for next time, I would love to hear them!! :)
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Postby Hlop on Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:02 am

Terrific, Johnny!
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Postby mudder on Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:22 pm

These are terrific, the one of "Venice, Italy" is great and I love the pano's.
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Postby flipfrog on Sun Jun 12, 2005 4:01 am

as i said when we were talking on msn, these are spectac pix which capture the beauty of Europe! i hope your wife didnt get tired of you looking for that <i>perfect</i> pic while she was busy sight-seeing :P

looks like you have many worthy pics for POTW ;)
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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Jun 13, 2005 5:38 am

Very cool shots, Johnny. :D I'm definitely envious of your trip. Maybe if I'd quit buying camera gear, I could afford to go somewhere and use it. :shock:
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Postby Geoff on Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:26 am

Neeper - these shots are awesome. Love your work and wish there were more to see! :)
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Postby Kristine on Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:32 pm

Nice shots - my favourite is St Gour, Germany.
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Postby christiand on Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:11 pm

Hi Neeper,

I really like your compositions - you have a good eye and skills.
Did you taste any wine in St Goar or St Goarshausen ?
Did you buy a "Roemer" (roman style wine glass)

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Postby wendellt on Mon Jun 13, 2005 11:51 pm

Hi Neeper

excellent work, europe will make you come back for more everytime, unless you get mugged or something but that wouldn't even stop me

the monte carlo bay picture is Awesome!

i see you have changed your avatar picture to the interior of the Musée d'Orsay

i hope you can share more images of your trip in the future
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Postby Neeper on Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:22 am

Wow, thanks for more comments guys. I didn't taste wine in St. Goar, because I don't like wine. However, most my tour group did.
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Postby mickwhit on Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:32 pm

Hi Neeper,

I'm very impressed with your images, they're stunning and it makes me even more anxious for my upcoming holiday to Africa and Europe. I just hope I can take some pictures that are close to the same standard as yours.

Congrats,

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