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running on water

Postby storm on Tue Jun 14, 2005 9:52 pm

here is a quick post from yesterday as I watched fellow nuts swing out into the water. This one was rather interesting. Kind of looks like he is sprinting across the water. I had to bump the ISO up to get the shots so it may look a little grainy.

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I havnt' looked through all the pics yet. I still may have some other decent ones. Have a great day all!!

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Postby NetMagi on Wed Jun 15, 2005 9:31 am

he does look like he's running on water

The ISO noise isn't noticeable, and the shot has exceptional shadow detail, but the DOF is a bit shallow.

Next time try shooting around F8, or get closer to the subject and pan on him so the background is motion blurred. I think either would add to the look.


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Postby storm on Wed Jun 15, 2005 9:43 am

Next time try shooting around F8, or get closer to the subject and pan on him so the background is motion blurred. I think either would add to the look.


I wanted to get into my kayak to get the shots but I love my D70 too much. The water there can be pretty squirrely. thanks for the suggestions buddy. see you tomorrow!
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:03 am

Storm - a nice photo - the last time I saw this was when Peter Sellars walked on water :wink:
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Postby Glen on Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:06 am

Chris,
You aren't old enough to see the Red Sea part the first time?

Storm, interesting shot, sure gives the illusion of walking on water
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:53 am

Glen - don’t be so sure. It was me that convinced Moses not to make it 12 commandments 8)
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Postby Glen on Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:03 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Glen - don’t be so sure. It was me that convinced Moses not to make it 12 commandments 8)



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Postby storm on Wed Jun 15, 2005 2:45 pm

thanks for the feedback guys. I hope to go down there on a brighter day and take some shots that are more crisp .
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