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That's a nice shot esp if it's at a rave. What's the colour version look like? Maybe try a bit of mix and match of both.
Gees looks like looking down at the poor sinners in Purgatory
Bless thy souls you sinners Cool shot Nexxus
Interesting abstract. There's something missing for me. Perhaps a little more contrast or a little more definition to the girl on the right would help give more meaning to the substantial motion blur.
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i agree with the post above me
then the photo would still look like art but also tell a story the B/W shot seems to glamarise the rave scene for some reason maybe because the photo has that art look the original version does push it to reality though
great use of blurlove the sense of movement. But don't people at dance parties smile a lot more than the pic suggests? The pic gives a wonderful feeling of loss or uncertainty from that girl's face - was that what was actually happening on the dance floor?
It's one of the fascinating things about taking pictures that what the outside looks like may not be what it feels like on the inside. good pic... Bob
"It is always the instantaneous reaction to oneself that produces a photograph." Robert Frank http://www.flickr.com/photos/rjlhughes/
We should all head out to Modesto and take an equivalent shot of a Modesto Rave, aka Line Dancing. The vacant look of morbid boredom on the faces of the particpants would tell a very different story.
g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
I like both versions, Nexxus. Very effective and, as said, atmospheric.
Hard work pays off in the future. Laziness pays off now.
linesGary,
I have no doubt that some of the people in the shot would have had a line or two.... Bob
"It is always the instantaneous reaction to oneself that produces a photograph." Robert Frank http://www.flickr.com/photos/rjlhughes/
Point taken, Bob.
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Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
The girl left of centre reminds me of ”The Scream” and as such adds the inferno connotation
Chris
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