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Postby focus on Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:02 pm

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:41 pm

There are problems with this pic BUT in saying that, I really do like everything about it. :D
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Postby embi on Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:42 pm

WOW!
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Postby embi on Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:43 pm

sirhc55 wrote:There are problems with this pic BUT in saying that, I really do like everything about it. :D


Do tell
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Postby Jamie on Sun Jun 19, 2005 7:28 pm

Fantastic!

Is that the way the picture came from the camera or did you play with it in photoshop? Either way its still great.

Well done. :)

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Postby Nnnnsic on Sun Jun 19, 2005 7:55 pm

embi wrote:
sirhc55 wrote:There are problems with this pic BUT in saying that, I really do like everything about it. :D


Do tell


Highlights are blowing out.
Not enough detail in the dark spots.
Focus seems odd.

It's still a nice picture, mind you.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:53 pm

As per what Leigh has stated plus there is a yellow type caste on the bottom left - still a great pic tho’
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:00 pm

I like this image. It has a strength of its own despite some very minor distractions. I would rather see a strong image that is slightly imperfect than a technically perfect image that expresses absolutely nothing. Well done and thanks for posting.
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Postby Link on Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:12 pm

Matt. K wrote:I like this image. It has a strength of its own despite some very minor distractions. I would rather see a strong image that is slightly imperfect than a technically perfect image that expresses absolutely nothing. Well done and thanks for posting.


Exactly my thought when I saw this image! Also, I quite like the bit of grain on the white shirt.

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Postby leek on Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:34 pm

Great image... can you now please tell us how you captured it?
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:58 pm

Focus - I, too, like this and echo what Matt said (but he said it better than I could have :wink: )
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:23 am

Echo!!!

I really love this type of photograph.

It is a great picture.
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Postby focus on Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:14 am

thanks all !!!

it was taken in Hampi, India. where I saw this man dreaming and looking at something far far away.

I'm no PS expert but I did increase the exposure to get rid of the distracting objects in distant background.

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