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A few swan river shots

Postby darb on Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:10 pm

if any take your eye please let me know ;

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Postby LOZ on Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:37 pm

darb I just love old boats one of my aims is to photograph EVERY classic boat on Sydney Harbor and create a coffee table album .Just love the first skiff and great pix as well :lol:
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:39 pm

Great images Darb. Love the second photo especially with the tree just framing the LHS nicely.
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Postby ozimax on Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:52 pm

Definitely the 2nd for me with the tall framing and red leaves, very effective, Max
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Postby spartikus on Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:20 am

Mate, I took some identical shots of possibly the same tree about a week ago, and mine were terrible in comparison! The second one is beautiful - you're very brave going out in the terrible weather we're having!
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Postby shockadelica- on Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:53 am

personally i think the 3rd shot
outshines them all not the 2nd as most seem to prefer

the top tree and bottom rocks frame the subject nicely
and you also have 5 layers starting from the rocks and ending in the misty city highrises
all the colours work..the blues/greys and the browns along with the greens/reds

lovely shot
if it were a part of a vertical series im sure people would hang this in there funky little city apartments
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Postby stephen on Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:47 pm

Love the third Darb
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Postby meicw on Sat Jun 18, 2005 7:32 pm

All are great, Darb. My fav is the 3rd one. As Shockadelica said, well composed.

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Postby darb on Mon Jun 20, 2005 3:04 pm

spartikus wrote:Mate, I took some identical shots of possibly the same tree about a week ago, and mine were terrible in comparison! The second one is beautiful - you're very brave going out in the terrible weather we're having!


cheers ... in applecross yeh?
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Postby spartikus on Mon Jun 20, 2005 3:11 pm

you got it! shame my day was a little darker! great colour on that tree though..

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Postby darb on Mon Jun 20, 2005 3:13 pm

friends with paul from bur.st are ya ? :)

i want to purge one of the above 3, but impossible to make a choice !
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Postby spartikus on Mon Jun 20, 2005 4:24 pm

Nope, just a donating member! I didn't think he was running the show anymore, anyway..

And as for the photos, I can't choose either! All great shots.
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Postby mudder on Mon Jun 20, 2005 7:28 pm

G'day,

That third one really does it for me out of these that's great, like the second too but the first seems too, (not sure) maybe symmetrical or something :oops:

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Postby bobrob on Wed Jun 22, 2005 2:56 pm

the 3rd one for me - nicely cropped
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Postby waspo on Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:09 pm

Wow!! Excellent shots mate, especially the 3rd one. I love how you've captured the composition of the tree, the city scape in the background through to the boat and rocks winding off in the foreground. Nicely balanced an well cropped! :D
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