Winter Swimmer

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Winter Swimmer

Postby Frankenstein on Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:56 pm

Image

I went for a very early morning roam around the Wollongong beaches yesterday. This bloke was the first of a bunch of nuts who plunged into the icy waters (and they were no spring chickens either) - I felt like a real wimp, all rugged up as I was watching them.

Frank
My photo gallery: http://www.frankalvaro.net
>>>> Nikon D300...Nikon 18-200 VR...Sigma 10-20...Tamron 90mm macro <<<<
"I've got an idea--an idea so smart that my head would explode if I even began to know what I'm talking about. " Peter Griffin
User avatar
Frankenstein
Senior Member
 
Posts: 504
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 12:23 pm
Location: Ruse (Sydney)

Postby stubbsy on Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:13 pm

Frank

Impressive. The clouds make this IMHO. This image just wouldn't work as well without that inky coloured sky.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby waspo on Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:15 pm

Great shot! Love the sky in the distance as well. But, I think I'm with you in watching and not joining in. I think you start to lose it when you get to a certain age. :lol:
User avatar
waspo
Member
 
Posts: 399
Joined: Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:46 pm
Location: Bentleigh East, Melbourne - SuPeR NikoN D7o aBuSeR!

Postby sheepie on Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:29 pm

Great spot that one :) I got some good pics there a few months back, on a similar sort of day. You've been lucky to get great cloud structure there - I like the way you've captured it.
Were you up on the steps leading down to the pool? Did you try any from a lower angle at all?
*** When getting there is half the fun! ***
User avatar
sheepie
Key Member
 
Posts: 3029
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:56 am
Location: Picnic Point, Sydney Australia *** Nikon D200/D70 ***

Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:25 pm

Frank, that's an excellent capture mate. The gloomy clouds and colours definitely create the atmosphere and the image.
User avatar
PiroStitch
Senior Member
 
Posts: 4669
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2005 1:08 am
Location: Hong Kong

Postby Catcha on Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:43 pm

nice shot............agree with rest clouds colors really bring life to the picture
Ben Yu

D300,SB800,Sigma 10-20,Mini Trekker Classic,Nova 3,Ixus 55 Other toys coming very soon..stayed tuned !!!!

Check out my site http://byu88.smugmug.com<>http://photobucket.com/byu88
User avatar
Catcha
Senior Member
 
Posts: 787
Joined: Sat Feb 26, 2005 2:36 am
Location: Darwin, Northern Territory Was the only true open speed limts in Australia

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:51 pm

Great shot with the added interest of a nutter in the aqua :roll: :lol:
Chris
--------------------------------
I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
User avatar
sirhc55
Key Member
 
Posts: 12930
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:57 pm
Location: Port Macquarie - Olympus EM-10

Postby Geoff on Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:52 pm

Frank - this is a top shot mate and I think the black border really helps make it stand out. Well done and I'm with you, I would've been a whimp rugged up photographing the insane ones in the water :)
Geoff
Special Moments Photography
Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
User avatar
Geoff
Moderator
 
Posts: 7791
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 12:08 am
Location: Freshwater - Northern Beaches, Sydney.

hi

Postby yeocsa on Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:05 am

Hi,

Excellent Pic. The fence and the water divider make the picture looks so interesting. The rough sea is such a contrast against the "safety" within the protection of the fence and water divider. It makes me wonder if the swimmer would venture out into the sea.

regards,

Arthur
yeocsa
Senior Member
 
Posts: 966
Joined: Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:04 pm
Location: Melbourne

Postby BBJ on Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:44 am

Wonderfull pic shy is cool and yeh well captured, and yeh im not that game either. Well done Frank.
Cheers
D3,D2x,D70,18-70 kit lens,Sigma 70-200mm F2.8EX HSM,Nikon AF-I 300m F2.8, TC20E 2X
80-400VR,SB800,Vosonic X Drive,VP6210 40
http://www.oz-images.com
User avatar
BBJ
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3651
Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:49 pm
Location: Mt Gambier South Australia-D70-D2X

Postby Frankenstein on Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:37 pm

sheepie wrote:Great spot that one :) I got some good pics there a few months back, on a similar sort of day. You've been lucky to get great cloud structure there - I like the way you've captured it.
Were you up on the steps leading down to the pool? Did you try any from a lower angle at all?


The funny thing is, when I woke at 5am and looked at the overcast weather, I nearly went back to bed - I was hoping for some nice sunrise shots (as i've taken some beauties along this coast). Luckily I still went, and even though the weather wasn't sunny I still got some useful shots. This pic was taken at Austinmer pool, and I was standing on the pathway that splits the pool into two. I did take some from a lower angle, although not with the swimmers in shot.

Thanks everyone for your comments.

Frank
My photo gallery: http://www.frankalvaro.net
>>>> Nikon D300...Nikon 18-200 VR...Sigma 10-20...Tamron 90mm macro <<<<
"I've got an idea--an idea so smart that my head would explode if I even began to know what I'm talking about. " Peter Griffin
User avatar
Frankenstein
Senior Member
 
Posts: 504
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 12:23 pm
Location: Ruse (Sydney)

Postby SoCal Steve on Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:46 pm

One freakin' gorgeous shot! The only thing you could ask for would be a little more clarity on the swimmer. Still... stunning!
Hard work pays off in the future. Laziness pays off now.
User avatar
SoCal Steve
Senior Member
 
Posts: 500
Joined: Tue Feb 01, 2005 6:25 pm
Location: Los Angeles, CA

Postby fozzie on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:00 pm

Frank - that is one hell of a shot.

Is he one of the iceburgers who swims every morning of the year :?:

I would rather stay in bed and keep warm :)
fozzie

When people ask what equipment I use - I tell them my eyes.
User avatar
fozzie
Key Member
 
Posts: 2806
Joined: Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:19 pm
Location: AUADA : Nikon D3/D2x - JPG Shooter

Postby gstark on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:07 pm

Foz,

fozzie wrote:Is he one of the iceburgers who swims every morning of the year :?:


No, he's an out of work actor; i.e. a hamburger. :)

For those who might think Frank's a wimp for not going into the water and staying all rugged up on the winter morn, what does that make me, who'll be content to remain in bed for another hour beyond when Frank was up to ensure he could get that shot?

And for those who might be inclined to answer, it's a rhetorical queston! :)
g.
Gary Stark
Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff
The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
User avatar
gstark
Site Admin
 
Posts: 22918
Joined: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:41 pm
Location: Bondi, NSW

Postby mic on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:09 pm

Great Image, just great. :shock:

Mic. :wink:
User avatar
mic
Retired Egg Flipper
 
Posts: 2167
Joined: Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:33 pm
Location: Glen Waverly VIC

Postby Killakoala on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:36 pm

It's a beautiful photo of contrast. Very nicely done.
Steve.
|D700| D2H | F5 | 70-200VR | 85 1.4 | 50 1.4 | 28-70 | 10.5 | 12-24 | SB800 |
Website-> http://www.stevekilburn.com
Leeds United for promotion in 2014 - Hurrah!!!
User avatar
Killakoala
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5398
Joined: Fri Aug 13, 2004 3:31 pm
Location: Southland NZ

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:40 pm

This is a terrific shot.
I also remember sheepie's pic from a little while ago, which was also excellent. His maybe showed a bit more of the pool.
The lonely swimmer in such bleak and obviously cold surroundings makes this shot memorable for me too.
Well done. :D
TFF (Trevor)
My History Blog: Your Brisbane: Past & Present
My Photo Blog: The Foto Fanatic
Nikon stuff!
User avatar
the foto fanatic
Moderator
 
Posts: 4212
Joined: Tue Aug 24, 2004 7:53 pm
Location: Teneriffe, Brisbane

Postby flipfrog on Tue Jun 21, 2005 6:42 pm

i think this is an awesome image too

the sky is amazing to look at...
User avatar
flipfrog
Senior Member
 
Posts: 626
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2005 8:33 pm
Location: Vancouver Canada

Postby ozimax on Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:05 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Great shot with the added interest of a nutter in the aqua :roll: :lol:


Chris' quote says it all!

Spectacular skies there, amazing shot in every respect, especially with the human polar bear doing laps. This photo could be in Nat Geographic.

Max
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Postby chris1968 on Wed Jun 22, 2005 6:26 am

fantastic shot, second the nat geographic comments - also reckon you could see it on office walls as one of those 'inspirational' images
User avatar
chris1968
Member
 
Posts: 151
Joined: Sun Jun 05, 2005 2:04 am
Location: Dark Side of the Moors. West Yorks. England.....D70

Postby HappyFotographer on Wed Jun 22, 2005 9:05 am

Just to echo everyone elses comments, what a great image.

Cheers
Deb (who doesn't think you're a wimp for staying out, but a definite nutter for being up at 5am voluntarily! - which is why I will never get great captures like this)
"Sometimes when you are sad Poko, it's good to hug the monkey."
User avatar
HappyFotographer
Member
 
Posts: 392
Joined: Mon Jan 03, 2005 4:58 pm
Location: Mnt Riverview Blue Mountains - Nikon D70

Postby ElTippo on Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:20 am

I've always been a fan of dark and stormy skies over the ocean so it's no wonder I love this shot.

You should flog it off to the people who do those motivational posters....

Can you see this pic with 'Dedication' titled under it on the office wall.....referring to the 'nutter' in the water although you being up at 5am qualifies too in my book :)

Super shot, I'm most envious.
ElTippo
Newbie
 
Posts: 19
Joined: Thu Mar 03, 2005 10:30 am
Location: Mornington, Vic.


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques