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Industrial - Creative images....

Postby Killakoala on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:30 pm

From my new gallery called Industrial - Creative

My latest project is to photograph the dark and ugly but photogenic side of industry and dockyards.

Whole gallery so far.....(9 images)
http://killakoala.smugmug.com/gallery/607983

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Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:48 pm

Hi Steve
This is an interesting concept. I looked at your page and thought there were a couple of better ones there - the cable drum, for one.
I think a couple of the shots are a bit too busy, and maybe a couple lack contrast as well.
But, imaginative and worth pursuing. (And a whole lot better than I could do :!: ) :)
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Postby Glen on Tue Jun 21, 2005 6:30 pm

Steve, like the concept and images :D :D
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Postby sheepie on Tue Jun 21, 2005 6:35 pm

Steve - I notice you've upgraded the smugmug account! What happened to putting your own website together?
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:10 am

sheepie wrote:Steve - I notice you've upgraded the smugmug account! What happened to putting your own website together?


I did it this way because i can update Smugmug while i am away from home, as i can't FTP when i am at sea.
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Postby ElTippo on Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:22 am

Good work Steve. I particularly like the train, I notice there are few lights along the track. Any chance of night shots? :D .

Great concept though, I like what I see so far. This site does wonders for my inspiration.
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