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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:02 pm

Shot with the Sigma 70-200 + 2x converter - effective 400mm f/6.7 @ 1/1000th, iso 400.

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Postby Geoff on Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:37 pm

Chris, this is a very interesting shot!!
It looks really quite arty, I like it..not that I'm anyway 'arty'..
But the butcher on the right looks kinda nervous or awkward...maybe he knows that all those knives above his head could fall down? There's a lot to look at in this pic. Is this a shop near the Bottle Shop at the bottom of the escalators near the car park at Neutral Bay? :)
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 05, 2005 1:23 pm

Chris

I understand this was shot with Sigma glass, but it looks very distorted to me (like it's been horizontally compressed) eg the butcher has a very tall narrow head. Or is this the artistic effect you were after?
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Postby Cows Go Moo on Tue Jul 05, 2005 1:27 pm

 LOL, it's another duck shot! :wink:
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jul 05, 2005 1:57 pm

Peter - Geoff is right, this is a painting on the window of a gourmet shop hence the distortion and my title - in one plane :D
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:06 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Peter - Geoff is right, this is a painting on the window of a gourmet shop hence the distortion and my title - in one plane :D

Ahhh :oops: . So the whole thing is a painting , or just parts?
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:09 pm

Peter,
Is it your day? :lol:
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Postby MHD on Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:44 pm

this is quite a mind job...
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Postby mic on Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:06 pm

This is Chris we are talking about here, of course it's a mind job :roll:

Well done Chris for the mind job, my mind is content now.

Haaarrrrrhhhhhh :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Postby leek on Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:09 pm

I was wondering why the lady had a fold line in the back of her head :lol:

Nice one Chris...
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:19 pm

Funny thing is that I thought that you would pick the line in her head John :lol:
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Postby leek on Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:52 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Funny thing is that I thought that you would pick the line in her head John :lol:


I thought you'd just been a little careless with your pano stitching - I wasn't game to comment :lol:
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 05, 2005 5:17 pm

Birddog114 wrote:Peter,
Is it your day? :lol:

Yep

I'm having a bad one. Had to work all last weekend (first week of July we generate 1/5th of our revenue - makes for busy times and long hours). :cry:
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Postby marcotrov on Tue Jul 05, 2005 6:59 pm

Interesting shot/s. Seems to challenge our sense of what's real and what isn't.
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