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Inside a old house

Postby Jeroen on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:33 pm

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picture is taken at the Biesbos the netherlands its a naturepark


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Postby yeocsa on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:37 pm

I like your concept. I think it could be better if the ambient light from the window is weaker to create the mood. May be you can try to use the pressure lamp as main light and take the picture just befor sunset.

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Postby glamy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:43 pm

I like the composition, the light may be a tad strong...
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:50 pm

Haven't seen the old man :lol:
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Postby wendellt on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:53 pm

Looks like a fine art still life painting.
Shame the roof look modern

great work

do you have a website?
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Postby Jeroen on Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:58 pm

wendellt wrote:Looks like a fine art still life painting.
Shame the roof look modern

great work

do you have a website?


yes i have please feel free to visit and feel free to drop me a line or two to send comments or brickbats.

http://www.fotogeniek.photos.de.com/
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Postby kipper on Tue Jul 12, 2005 6:20 pm

Nice shot, but I feel more age could fo been given to the shot if there was some dust in the environment. It's backlit from a vertical angle from the right, so it would of been perfect.
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Postby Catcha on Tue Jul 12, 2005 6:56 pm

Hmm If that picture was it B&W would it give it a better affect ? nice shot :D
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