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Waiting Far A train

Postby Jeroen on Tue Jul 12, 2005 10:30 pm

Antwerp Station


this lady was just waiting for a train. Just lissens to her mp3

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Postby glamy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 10:34 pm

I like it, nice.
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Postby christiand on Tue Jul 12, 2005 10:36 pm

Hi Jeroen,

I like the composition of the photo, in particular I like a number of things such as:

The verticals are vertical.
The horizontals are horizontal.
The lady is colour.
The background is mono and slightly blurred.
The lady is in the right hand corner of the photo looking upwards.

Show us more of your "stuff"

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:14 pm

Excellent composition & PP. A good example of where the colour in B & W thing really works. Pushes all my buttons (especially all those lovely lines) :lol:
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:01 am

And it's not an ipod! :D

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Postby Jeroen on Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:05 am

could be a ipod.
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:31 am

Unless they released headphones in silver, I doubt it :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:35 am

Another lovely shot :D
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:54 am

PiroStitch wrote:Unless they released headphones in silver, I doubt it :)

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Like lots of iPod owners I don't use the Apple headset. I bought a nice Sony earbud one. Of course I bought a white one, but I COULD have got it in black (or silver, or red....)
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Postby wendellt on Wed Jul 13, 2005 11:21 am

Jeroen

you have areal style going, i like it very much.

background is almost monotone really contrasts the subtle tones of the foreground subject
and your framing is asymetrical and interesting

think she is a tourist, she has a little digicam at a train station
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Postby Willy wombat on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:29 am

I like this picture too. Works very well.
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Postby Jeroen on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:32 am

thx all for the reply.
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