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Foggy Morning.......

Postby MATT on Thu Jul 14, 2005 10:42 am

Foggy here in Bilo this morning,

Here is a B&W looking up my driveway, taken with my spanky new 24-120VR(Thanks Birdy)

Critique Welcome

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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:30 am

Matt - I love misty shots - my only critique would be to lay tar :wink: :lol:
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:44 am

That looks very country Matt, what part of the world do you live in?
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:55 am

Matt

Good shot, nicely framed. Very evocative and the monochrome treatment adds nicely to the effect.
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Postby rokkstar on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:56 am

Yep, I agree. Lovely shot there - very moody.
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Postby barry on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:09 pm

Great shot Matt. I think the black frame is too overpowering and detracts from the shot. Maybe a pencil thick line would be better.

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Postby gecko on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:47 pm

Congrats on the new lens (said with envy)
I like your image - well done
I must learn how to put the nifty frame around an image one day
A slight crop might help - remove the part of the tree on the right?

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Postby HappyFotographer on Thu Jul 14, 2005 4:44 pm

No critique, just wanted to say it is a damn fine shot.

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Postby embi on Thu Jul 14, 2005 5:29 pm

Awesome shot. Well done
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Postby Hudo on Thu Jul 14, 2005 5:40 pm

A very nice shot. But fog in sunny Queensland? :shock: Well done :D
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Postby MATT on Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:00 am

Thanks for the encouraging replies.

barry I agree with the frame is overpowering. Will try a differnet one.


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Postby robboh on Fri Jul 15, 2005 3:22 pm

Very nice shot Matt. I love pics like this! Agreed about the frame. I like the double matte look, maybe a thin black line around the outside and then a drop shadow around the side and bottom edges??
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