Which script

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Which script

Postby Willy wombat on Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:25 pm

Some people commented that the bright yellow script i was using (#2) was distracting. What do you think of my new version (#1)?

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{47E0F0C5-D2D7-4D0C-8A37-43DED5B72737}/picture.JPG[/img]

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{1EEAFAC3-834C-4A20-B173-2EF4E6FEA0A4}/picture.JPG[/img]

Also - what do you think of these two shots? Taken on the same morning, but the light was changing so quickly with the sunrise. I like the second shot with the birds waiting to take off and grab a feed. They were quite noisy (singing to each other)?
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Postby rokkstar on Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:28 pm

I love the first one. The light is perfect.
I prefer the grey script too.
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Postby Hudo on Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:30 pm

The first shot is my fav of the two.

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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:25 pm

#1 :wink:
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Postby Atorie on Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:43 pm

Yeah, go the grey one.. doesn't lead they eye away from the photo.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:36 pm

WW #1 is great and the grey is better than the yellow in the script.
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