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Postby beej on Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:51 pm

Here's a series of pics of two (rather drunk) friends.

I want to frame these 3 shots and give it to them both as a present, but i'm stuck for a title, any suggestions?

Also, any suggestions on what order they should be in?

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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:24 pm

#2 at 1, #1 at 2 and #3 at 3 - all the worlds a stage - hick :lol:
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Postby jethro on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:04 pm

chicks at their best.! PISSED! nice framing though is that done in illustrator?
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:31 pm

jethro wrote:chicks at their best.! PISSED! nice framing though is that done in illustrator?

puhleeeese :roll:
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:35 pm

Beej

I agree with Chris - the sequence he suggests would work better.

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Postby leek on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:47 pm

stubbsy wrote:
jethro wrote:chicks at their best.! PISSED! nice framing though is that done in illustrator?

puhleeeese :roll:


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Postby leek on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:47 pm

I agree with Chris' sequence and would suggest the title:

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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:48 pm

leek wrote:
stubbsy wrote:
jethro wrote:chicks at their best.! PISSED! nice framing though is that done in illustrator?

puhleeeese :roll:


:?:

Maybe too cryptic. How's this:

Jethro - give me a break. Comment is in poor taste even if meant to be humorous (which I'm assuming it was) :wink:
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Postby chris1968 on Thu Jul 14, 2005 10:40 pm

great shots! - how'd you do the framing - i love it

as for a title - what about

Hicc........Hicc...........Hurrayyyyyyyyyyy!
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Postby hangdog on Thu Jul 14, 2005 10:51 pm

How about this variation?

tript*hic*

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Postby embi on Thu Jul 14, 2005 10:54 pm

Awesome series and great candid capture..... I love the framing too....how did you do it.
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Postby beej on Fri Jul 15, 2005 1:41 am

Thanks a heap for your suggestions!!

The border is actually from a set of really really cool PSD templates called Andrea's Borders, they can be downloaded from here:

http://www.atncentral.com/download.htm#Andreas_Borders

Thanks again!

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Postby jethro on Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:06 pm

thanks beej ill look at those. stubbsy pull your head in!
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Postby Raydar on Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:32 pm

Nice shots mate!!!!

How about "ONE FOR THE ROAD--again!!!" :D


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Postby kipper on Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:03 pm

I have to agree with Jethro, it was fairly light humoured what he said. I'm sure the girls out there would say something similar if they saw a bunch of off their face blokes doing blokey things when drunk.
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Postby joolz on Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:24 pm

How about:
Strike a pose... Vogue.
1st image last.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:39 am

jethro wrote:thanks beej ill look at those. stubbsy pull your head in!

Just call me tortoise :wink: Or is that turtle :lol:
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