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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:30 am

Shot with: 80-400VR, f/7.1,1/200, 400mm, ISO800.
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Postby shinwood on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:58 am

Fantastic.
Sharp, clear, amazing colour!

I want one of those lenses.....

Good work Hlop.

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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:32 am

Thanks Sonny!

You've got pretty good chance to get it during AW even cheaper than they usually are from Birddog. I've got 24-120VR and 80-400VR and they worth every cent I paid for them
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Postby Glen on Thu Jul 28, 2005 11:06 am

Mikhail, very nice, a moment caught in a nice way, I especially like the dark background of this shot
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jul 28, 2005 11:11 am

Mikhail

A great capture and it well and trully shows your mastery of the 80-400.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Jul 28, 2005 11:30 am

Hlop - very nice work :D I also agree with you about the 70-200 and 80-400VR's. I'm not getting rid of either.
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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 28, 2005 8:14 pm

Thanks for your comments people! Probaly first time all of them are positive :)
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Postby Atorie on Thu Jul 28, 2005 8:47 pm

This is a beautiful shot.. my fiance's parents love parrots and she said they'd love this as a print... could i organise to buy this off you as a print?
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Postby thaddeus on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:22 pm

i absolutely hate this shot
(because i wish i'd shot it myself!)

well done!
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Postby Alex on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:30 pm

Great capture, Mikhail. Well done.
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Postby christiand on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:32 pm

Mikhail,

a very lovely shot.
Great shot !

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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:36 pm

Atorie wrote:This is a beautiful shot.. my fiance's parents love parrots and she said they'd love this as a print... could i organise to buy this off you as a print?


Aw... you caught me unaware ... Don't know what to say ... Probably something like "Make me an offer" :)
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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:38 pm

Many thanks, everyone :)
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Postby Onyx on Fri Jul 29, 2005 2:28 am

My first impression - it's very clean for ISO800! Then I see the feathers - while the main spikes are still there, it's kinda lacking in finer details. I'd like to see a less noise removed version, preserving the feather details and perhaps along with the noise too. It's looking very Canonesque in its plasticity.
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Postby Hlop on Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:55 am

Onyx wrote:My first impression - it's very clean for ISO800! Then I see the feathers - while the main spikes are still there, it's kinda lacking in finer details. I'd like to see a less noise removed version, preserving the feather details and perhaps along with the noise too.

There are 2 things I really don't like - noise and CA. That's why I removed noise with neat image. Anyway, I'll try noise-removal-less version tonight if you wish to see it
It's looking very Canonesque ....

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Postby Hlop on Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:32 pm

Especially for pure and only Onyx :) No noise reduction version:
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P.S. I applied color aliasing removal to make noise pure colorless but didn't remove noise itself
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Postby Onyx on Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:10 am

Awesome Mikhail, wow I feel so special you made that version on my request. :)

The bit of grittiness IMO has injected life into it. ;)
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Postby leek on Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:37 am

That's a fantastic shot Mikhail... Where was it taken?

I too prefer the second shot... It has a little more life in it...
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