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My first picture post

Postby Rick on Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:30 pm

O.K. Here I go, I have been a member for about 6 months, I have posted a few times but no pictures.

This photo was taken at Brisbane Water about 2 months ago, just downstream of the Spit Bridge at about 9.00am.

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I hope you like this photo and your comments are very welcome.

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Postby spartikus on Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:33 pm

Mate, I really like this! Even though the boat is a tad off centre, I think it works well with the shot, and the dull colours actually suit the shot as well, no need for saturation anything like that! Keep this up!
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Postby HappyFotographer on Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:34 pm

Hi Rick

glad you finally put up an image.

I really like this image.......amazingly clear reflection......the water is so still.

Don't stop now you have started.

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Postby nito on Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:48 pm

Hey Rick, thats one nice shot! :D WOW!
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Postby WadeM on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:09 pm

Please post more photos. I like what you've captures in this shot!

Nothing is washed out, everything on the boat is in focus. The refelection is even in focus! That's a very hard shot to get. PLEASE post more!

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Postby embi on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:10 pm

Awesome image. Keep 'em coming
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:15 pm

Rick,
Took you 6 months to learn your DSLR and got this marvellous photos, you have reached the high mark in photography and artistic.
I love the reflection, keep 'em coming often on this board.

:lol: :lol: :lol:
Sure is no Woody involved on this shot.
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Postby Rick on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:25 pm

The Kids have gone home so I can now thank you and reply to your comments,

Chris, it is slightly of centre I hadn't noticed, I dont think it hurts to much maybe better if the extra space was in front of the boat.

Deb, it was a great morning for photography, we were going up for a kids party in the PM so decided to leave early to get some shots of sunrise, birds and mist on the water, sunrise lasted about 1.5min and was nothing at all, no pelicans and no mist so we drove around and were lucky with some other locations.

Nito & Wade, thanks for your comments, it was one of those perfectly still mornings and I was just lucky, in hindsight I should have taken more shots from different angles, I have a couple of others that I will post later.

thanks, Rick.
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Postby informer on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:27 pm

I like it, reflection, sharpness everything. Though I would like to see the horizon with the couple of ducks flying past :lol:

Water colour seemed a bit dull though, I had the same colour in my beach photos. Guess Photoshop could fix that? Would love it in deep blue.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:28 pm

Rick
Excellent first post. A tranquil image that has lots of of the essential elements.....contrast, composition, muted colour and texture. If the boat is in your locality and still there try some images at sunset etc. It's a very good subject.
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Postby W00DY on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:29 pm

Birddog114 wrote:
Sure is no Woody involved on this shot.



Only involvment from me was to teach Rick how to convert to JPEG and upload the image..

I like this shot but there was another dad took from that day that I like better, will have to get him to upload a few more.
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:31 pm

[quote="informer"] Though I would like to see the horizon with the couple of ducks flying past :lol:
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informer,
Don't you know duck is prohibited on this board atm? since drama hit yeosca for punishing him of taking photo of ducks we missed his skill. :lol:
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:33 pm

W00DY wrote:
Birddog114 wrote:
Sure is no Woody involved on this shot.



Only involvment from me was to teach Rick how to convert to JPEG and upload the image..

I like this shot but there was another dad took from that day that I like better, will have to get him to upload a few more.


Woody,
I'm sure you'll raise your voice when you read my post :lol: Haven't seen you since then.
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Postby Alex on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:38 pm

Great image. I like the composition. Rule of thirds certainly does it for me here.

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Postby big pix on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:46 pm

..... great shot and a great fishing spot..... for me I would like to see a bit more water around the boat if possible and then set the boat off centre with a bit of brightness to the shot.... and as stated the image is also fine as is.....
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Postby W00DY on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:48 pm

Birddog114 wrote:
Woody,
I'm sure you'll raise your voice when you read my post :lol: Haven't seen you since then.



Not sure what you mean Birdy :?

I know I have not been on for ages... I actually havn't even taken a photo with my camera for almost 2 months. Too busy with Kids and a new job.

I'll try and post more again though, I have missed the forum :)

Woody. PS: This post is for Rick's image though so let's keep on that :)
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Postby Glen on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:54 pm

Nice image Rick, brings nice tranquil thoughts to mind
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Postby christiand on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:59 pm

Hi Rick,

I love the photo of the boat, it is great.
Nit picking could suggest to get rid of "stuff" (twigs ?) in the water, but hey
that is nit picking.
Did you crop it ?
What lens did you use.
What PP ?

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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:10 pm

I really like it Rick. Simple and beutiful. I will look out for your next post. Dont take 6 months between drinks though. You will get thirsty... :?
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Postby jethro on Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:49 pm

rick top shot for a first, nice exposure, crop needs bit of work but hey if this is the first LOOK OUT.
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Postby marcus on Tue Aug 02, 2005 11:55 pm

Whoa!! Great shot. Bring it on.........perhaps a B&W version would be a nice addition to the post?
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:32 am

Rick - I have read all of the posts and I must say first up that I like your shot. But, unlike the others I would like to see some mystery in the shot and by actually softening the whole image you would create a whole new perspective. In my mind I see this image within a swirling fog. :D A Marie Celeste of rowing boats 8)
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Postby gstark on Wed Aug 03, 2005 7:26 am

Rick,

Great first post. This just oozes tranquility.

I'd like to see a bit more space in front of, and at the top of, the boat, but that's just me.

More please.
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Postby flipfrog on Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:03 am

beauty Rick!

i would like to see this pic with more negative space (more water)...
i think it would be even more calming to look at ....
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Postby KerryPierce on Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:11 am

Very nice shot, Rick. :D
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Postby Rick on Wed Aug 03, 2005 7:54 pm

christiand wrote:Hi Rick,

Did you crop it ?
What lens did you use.
What PP ?



Thanks for everyone's comments, I got a lot more response from my post than I expected.

To answer your questions, no I didn't crop it, I used 24-120 D lens, 1/1000th second @ F5.6 manual using nikon capture I added +0.17 exp comp, high contrast & small amount unsharp mask.
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Postby mudder on Wed Aug 03, 2005 7:58 pm

G'day Rick,
Wow, great first post, looking forward to more... Very tranquil and relaxing... Grabs the viewer...
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Postby sheepie on Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:10 pm

Hi Rick - others have already said it, but I'm gonna join in - nice pic, especially as a first up :)

The stillness of the water is what makes this image - that reflection really is amazing.

I do look at the pic, however, and want to know more - perhaps a little more behind the boat, with a horizon, would help set the scene. I like the idea of a bit of fog added - but this would be 'adding stuff that's not there' (which some don't like - they say it's not really photography!).

Repeating others (again), if this is your first image, looking forward to seeing more :)
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