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Glasshouse Mountains, Qld.

Postby Raskill on Mon Aug 08, 2005 6:08 pm

Just a fw of my images from a recent Qld trip. As luck would have it, I forgot my tripod foot, so most of the pics are monopod or handheld Sigma 70-200mm f/2.8 APO DG ETC ETC. I think the Sigma 20mm f/1.8 APO ETC ETC makes an appearence also.

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Taken with the sigma 70-200mm 2.8, handheld. Very happy with this image, on the full size original the water droplets are sharp as a tack.

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Taken with sigma 20mm 1.8, handheld. I like this image, although it's nothing overly special. I knelt in a bull ants nest to get it, so I hope someone out there appreciates it :lol:

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Taken with Sigma 70-200mm 2.8, monopod. The great colours are thanks to burning off nearby (and a small amount of PP, brightness and contrast).

Please give me advice on how I can improve these, I need to learn!! Thanks in advance.
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Postby xerubus on Mon Aug 08, 2005 6:46 pm

Hi mate...

I like the shots, however I would have processed the last one a little bit differently... hope you don't mind me editing the shot.. let me know.

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All I have done is cropped it so that it is more like a panorama, plus increased the saturation to give it a deeper sunset feel....

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Postby nat on Mon Aug 08, 2005 6:50 pm

Hi Raskill,
Being a beginner you might want to take my comments with a pinch of salt, but I really like the first one. There is an obvious sense of fun and enjoyment . Young children are great for this - I've got a 15month old who makes me smile alot). :)
I like the colour of the third one, but wondered if cropping some of the "darkness" from the bottom would help to focus on the coloured sky a little more. Just my thoughts - although as a beginner I may be heading down the wrong track. :?:
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Postby Raskill on Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:46 pm

xerubus, yes, like that crop, also like the different PP. What did you do to it? I need to learn a bit about PPing images. I'm using photoshop 5.5 just now (I know it's older than I am) but will soon have Photoshop 7.

I drove through your neck of the woods the other day, Mango Hill etc. Was looking for some firie with a D70, but didn't see one :D

Meerkat, thanks for your input also, it doesn't make a difference if you're a beginner, your still right and I appreciate your comments.

Any input is good input, so thanks very much!!
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Postby xerubus on Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:51 pm

Raskill wrote:xerubus, yes, like that crop, also like the different PP. What did you do to it? I need to learn a bit about PPing images. I'm using photoshop 5.5 just now (I know it's older than I am) but will soon have Photoshop 7.


i used photoshop. simply used the crop tool to crop it and increased the saturation and hue. that's all there was to it... nothing tricky at all.

a good source for tutorials etc (apart from here ofcourse) is http://luminous-landscape.com . have a surf around in there and you'll find some good tips.

Raskill wrote:I drove through your neck of the woods the other day, Mango Hill etc. Was looking for some firie with a D70, but didn't see one :D


hahaha... nothing ever happens in Mango Hill.... my wife refers to it as pleasantsville like the movie. Have to go to surrounding suburbs to see the real world... :)

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Postby Glen on Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:55 pm

Raskill, like all three, maybe with a bit of a crop of the foreground in two, not too much, just about root level. Great shots
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