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maybe it's my eyes

Postby rjlhughes on Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:59 am

maybe this does look better with a bit of blur
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but then what if all my pics look better blurred......?
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Postby atencati on Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:13 am

Very nice, and I wouldn't say it is blurred so much as soft which works well witht the lighting. A very dreamy effect, especially witht the monochromatic blue. You should post it in the August assignment (blue something or other - I can't remember) Anyways, nice work.

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Postby gstark on Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:07 am

Bob,

Very nice. Perhaps tilt the horizon back to zero degrees, but otherwise this works very well.
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Postby Killakoala on Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:13 am

Nice use of shadows and contrasting highlights. A very difficult exposure to get right. Well done.

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Postby rjlhughes on Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:21 am

Thank you gentlemen.

Gary I was outside a hotel! No wonder the horizon isn't straight!
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Postby moggy on Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:26 am

I like this shot very much, every time I look at it, it seems to mean something different with that moody lighting.
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Postby Sheetshooter on Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:27 am

Nice one Bob,

It has something oif a Polaroid SX-70 look and feel to it.

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Postby rjlhughes on Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:29 am

In this case a spirit level might be a PCA....
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